Ohio Impromptu

Sorry about the I's. Its just become a habit to not capitalize them when i type. Mainly because if I'm using microsoft word it does it for me. This piece ...

Well the thoughts came from when i asked a friend of mine for inspiration. She asked me how i felt at that exact moment and i told her that i ...

From what i could understand, it was great. Its my fault i can't understand it though so don't change a thing. Nice work indeed.

Why thankyou. :wink:

Sounds like a solid prelude there man. Definately makes me wanna find out how this goes. Cant see anything wrong with it all so i'm just telling you that it ...

Ok, here is the final product. Its exactly the same but with a new verse in the middle. Enjoy. Weaving thread through itself, forcing perfection can never work. Difficulty is ...

Really? No one wants to post anything?

Wow, that was amazing. The feeling behind it was mind-blowing and the story was just as good. I absolutely adore the last line! I can't offer any criticism because i ...

Thanks guys :) Anyone else have anything to say?

That was awesome dude. I love it that you didnt fully explain everything and left it to our imaginations. I cant think of a way to improve it because it ...

I enjoyed this a lot! Very nice indeed. The imagery was mind-blowing and your way with words is amazing. The repetition of the last lines of the first three stanzas ...